Empathy

• My stroy has a little bit of setup times and actual place but couls work on that more need spefic time
• I did recall some feelings and sights and sounds but I did not use tastes.
•  I did give actual names of all the people in my story and all the places I gave information on but not the spefic place.
•  My story needs some more conflict there is a little bit and it creates tenison at the end of the story. I did grow from this story added to my moral base because of the story
• The story is told from the author's point of view.
• My story is revelant to today because it built my some of my moral standards on where I am today , It will still be revelant in the future because i will never lose my morals so it will always be revelant.