Empathy

• My stroy has a little bit of setup times and actual place but couls work on that more need spefic time
• I did recall some feelings and sights and sounds but I did not use tastes.
•  I did give actual names of all the people in my story and all the places I gave information on but not the spefic place.
•  My story needs some more conflict there is a little bit and it creates tenison at the end of the story. I did grow from this story added to my moral base because of the story
• The story is told from the author's point of view.
• My story is revelant to today because it built my some of my moral standards on where I am today , It will still be revelant in the future because i will never lose my morals so it will always be revelant.

Helen Keller

1. What did you think of this narrative?

 I thought the narrative was very well written with lots of sensory details.

2. What was most interesting or engaging about it?

The most interesting part was when she fought with her teacher about what a mug and water is because it showed that she was able to argue and make a point.

3. What surprised you?

The moment when she realized that the barriers can be taken down and she realize who was closet to her meaning her mother father and teacher was the most surprising.

4. Did this change your outlook on Helen Keller at all? Why or why not?

Yes this changes my outlook on Helen Keller because I thought she was just a mad little kid but this told me different and  that she was mad because she lost her vision and then Ann Sullivan came and helped her though her problems.

5. Copy and paste three examples of vivid detail and imagery that helped enhance the story

1. The afternoon sun penetrated the mass of honeysuckle that covered the porch, and fell on my upturned face.

2. My fingers lingered almost unconsciously on the familiar leaves and blossoms which had just come forth to greet the sweet southern spring.

3. Have you ever been at sea in a dense fog, when it seemed as if a tangible white darkness shut you in, and the great ship, tense and anxious, groped her way toward the shore with plummet and sounding-line, and you waited with beating heart for something to happen?

6. How can a narrative be more engaging than something like a biography? Why is it important to get someone's personal perspective?

Its important to get the personal perspective because then the narrative is more meaningful and if the writer includes tons off sensory details and some background information will make a great narrative.

7. Make a bulleted lists of some things you could write a narrative about

·         Trip to Canada where I fell off boat

·         Football when I broke my leg

·         Creek trip into the woods getting lost

·         Trip to Michigan with my grandparents

where i'm from

 I’m from the Amish the thoughts of following a horse and buggy with that bright orange triangle embedded in my mind.
I’m from off brand toys and hand me down clothes. Candle light dinner because the power was off.
 I’m from the moving truck that I always called home. The sound of the dolly moving up and down the silver bumpy ramp.
I’m from long nights with no sleep listening to my parents fight and complain.

I’m from the hot wheels cars and boy scouts. Building ramps out of sheets connecting them to the dresser.
I’m from the red and white poke ball. Long times spent next to my brother and our clear purple Gameboy colors.
I’m from the dark and mysterious forest. Where hide and go seek games go from minutes into hours.
I’m from the small winding murky water and tiny rocks that were use to stop up the creek and make a dam with my best friend.

I’m from the two hands that it requires to tag a player down. One day during practice Archie griffin came and talked to the our WYB team
I’m from mans best friend who was always be my side. My dog would always bark at my mom or dad when they gave me spankings.
I’m from bright red sunburn and crystal clear water and the smell of chlorine. After hours spent at the pool I got blisters and extremely red and went to the hospital with sun poising.
These things make me the person who I am and I am me.

Questions

1. I do not enjoy english class because i dont not enjoy reading and grammar.
2. Short story, Notes to friends, Jokes.
3. Comic Strips, Magazines, News paper.
4. there are no assignments that i really despise.
5. A
6. Yes, I enjoy classroom discussions because you get to express your opinons and thoughts and hear others thoughts also.
7. I normally contribute to the discussion but sometimes i will silently listen.
8. I take care of my sister.
9. Over the weekend I, went to the basketball game at kilbourne high school was the first away basketball game i went to it was really fun and exciting , also i went to the movies with some of my friends to see contraband but it was sold out and saw misson impossiable 4 instead it was a good and really long movie.
10. Nothing
11.